Reviews For Heart of Stone
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Title: Orcs' conversation Reviewer: haldirsbaby Anonymous
I love this story. is there more or is this it....please tell me there is more. good job.

Author's Response: There is :) It's a long way to go before the story is over. I'm glad i have ensnared a new reader. I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Date: Jul 09 2010 12:17 am [Report This]
Title: Orcs' conversation Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Close call with the Orcs. Sounds like Haldir is not going to be the master of his domain for long. I like how your story is unfolding. I just wanted to let you know that I'm leaving for vacation tomorrow and I don't know if I'll have internet where I'm going. So if you don't get a review from me in the next two weeks, I haven't forgotten. Keep up the good work. Your writing is improving quite a bit.

Author's Response: You'd be surprised how well Haldir can control himself. But when he comes undone he'll be dragging Calavene down with him. That's still along way to go. Lol need some character development for Haldir and to let Calavene shine for a bit. I will miss your reviews and have a pleasant vacation. Wish i could go on one too. My writing's improved? Thank you! That's so nice of you to say so. i have been searching for websites of Tolkien's work to familiarize with the words he used.
Date: Jul 08 2010 09:28 pm [Report This]
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