A bloody fabulous story, you have a very strong, mischievous humour and that reminds me of the humour of well known comedians like Wil Anderson.
Author's Response: Oh! wow! Thanks! I never really thought of myself as funny. I can't believe nobody came up with this idea before me!
I read this story aloud at a family gathering and it had everyone doubled over with laughter. Bravo!
Author's Response: LOL! I'm sooo embarrassed! I have no idea why she decides to lick it! It just seemed so naughty.
Oh, I knew you were talking about his sword. Yea, that's it. That's right. Uh his sword. ;) hehehe. Very amusing. Great read. Wonderful play on words. I enjoyed it immensely.
Author's Response: LOL! thanks! I got this idea when i was standing at the kitchen sink! It's so naughty!