AWESOME!!!!! Wonderful story!!!!!!
Would you please consider writing that sequel?!!!!
Author's Response: Hi thank you for the positive review it always inspires :) I am just in the process of completing Doren En Ind and then I will go over First impressions to make any adjustments, but I have already begun to write the sequel for the Big Bang but then pulled out and I do intend to post it sometime this year if not sooner. Watch this space!!!
When those two do stop fighting I'm sure the sparks will fly even more. ;-)
The pictures are lovely; I like the muted tones.
Author's Response: Thanks melusine :D And it's all thanks to you. I have had writers block, but chapter four is on its way. xx
They are small and some details are hard to make out. Personally, I find them in good taste. Just remember, less is more. I'm not sure how to do images or I would try it in my own stories.
Author's Response: I no they are small, but this site only allows 200x200 for the size otherwise they would be bigger.
I found nothing confusing but rather suspenseful. Can't wait to read more on this story. Great writing. I'm hooked and look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, the next chapter will be in shortly I promise you. One question, are the images too graphic, I have never used graphic images in a story before?