Your writing if delicious and vividly beautiful. You describe characters and events in such a way that they are alive. I anxiously await seeing what happens to the brothers next.
Thank you for such magnificent work.
I really appreciate the way you consider the complexities of emotion inherent in an incestuous relationship. It's not something I see very often on this or any site, and when it is written, people seem to overlook the emotional coils and prohibitions of such an attraction, when that is actually what they should focus on the most. It's really well done in this story, December.
The sex is revelatory and savage and beautiful, and the two brothers -- well, they go a long way to making me forget how they were in the films, as this is Boromir and Faramir from the books. Well done! :)
I love your story very much. Unfortunately i just learn english, so i can understand it hardly, but my dictionary is very useful :P I really like how you discribe the two brothers feelings and their thoughts, we can easily understand how they feel. I cannot wait to read the next chapter :))
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, Cirinde! It is a great encouragement to me to know the next chapter is being waited for :) What is your native language, by the way? You know, English is not my mother-tongue either :) And I also have a friend who pretty much learned Eglish by reading fanfiction, it can give some really good practice. Once again, thanks for your kind words!