Oh, my, very intense! This story is a well-deserved MEFA.
Author's Response: Thanks again Melusine. One of the real reasons I am posting this here is because i want to post the sequel with added slashy goodness. But i ma enjoying revisiting this.
Ooh, started reading this elsewhere and am happy to see it here (less crowded for commenting)! Would love to see the sequel here too, please?
Author's Response: Thank you ebbingnight! I think you might like this version even more and oh yes- hotted up version of Sons coming soon.
Ooh, wonderful! Your use of language is very deft. Reading this I can feel the darkness, and the light.
Author's Response: I am really flattered that you are reading this- I am a big fan of yours and , at the risk of gushing, overwhelmed that you are enjoying it.