Your work is good. And I know it is work! I have to review it in a positive way. It is enjoyable and your effort shines through.
Author's Response: Thank you again, more than words. And also just for taking the time and reviewing EVERYTHING I write! It is amazing! Thank you so much. =)
Gimli feels like I would if I met Glorfindel!! And guess what. I'd ask the same thing of him. You've done a great job of capturing the moment from his perspective.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for always reading and reviewing my work in such a positive way =) This is my first shot at GOOD poetry, and it's good to know an authour I look up to enjoyed it =)
You have managed to portray Gimli's thoughts wonderfully. It is as if I am eavesdropping on his mind. Very good.
Author's Response: Thank you very much =) It was a challenging piece to write, I'm glad you think that I did it well.