Date: 21/11/04 - 11:13 am Title: Rememberance
Very nice. Great way to have Merry--and Pip--come to terms with missing their cousin and letting him go. I liked how you included the reminiscing (that is not spelled right, methinks!) without losing track of the present moment. One or two typos you might want to catch when you have the time, but they aren't glaring. Very sweet, especially with the mushrooms and thank you at the end. Good job.