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Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/10 - 04:34 pm Title: Thoughts Upon Leaving

Sad! Goes right to the heart! You can see so much of a tale behind these two yet these few lines were enough to delve up their deep feelings. Good work, Dae!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! There is a story behind this story, I just haven't finished it yet :)

Reviewer: teacalm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/10 - 01:04 am Title: Thoughts Upon Leaving

Strong scene. I love strong characters who can deny themselves, and choose not to beg, but to continue to move and go on even though inside their hearts are breaking. It's very much like what real life is all about. Short but strong.

Author's Response: This particular character is very much like that. Her whole life has been a whirlwind of pain and she knows what she has to do and does it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lisse Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/10 - 11:35 pm Title: Thoughts Upon Leaving

Very beautiful. At first I thought it was Aragorn and Arwen, Then I saw Elladan at the end. Makes it even better. You always write with such explicit emotion. Can feel the holes bored in your back, a great description. I wish I were better at saying why I like some thing. It takes me a few reads before I can really comment. Just wanted you to know I feel the emotion and love the verse!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was listening to some music that all of a sudden inspired this. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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