Reviews For Unrelenting Love
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Title: Chapter 11 - Home Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Good to see an update from you. My, things seem as though they are about to get complicated. Looking forward to more.
Date: Oct 04 2011 07:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10 - The Wedding Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Haldir, just throw her to the floor and get on with it! LOL. Good chapter. I sure hope Lothestel comes around soon. I mean, does she know how lucky she is in the first place? Can't wait for more and it's nice to see you back writing again.

Author's Response: Don't we all wish that happened to us lol But doing that might drive Lothestel away. She is a very proud elleth XD It's good to be writing back again :) and thank you for reviewing Moe :)
Date: Aug 09 2011 01:41 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 - What the Eyes Saw Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I knew that sneaky little elleth would pull something like this. Lothestel is like a skiddish cat. One wrong move and she's out of there. Haldir's gonna have to do some sweet talking to get her to see it was not his fault. Nice to see an update. Hope the next one will come sooner.

Author's Response: She didnt do it on purpose i think. People do stupid things when they're in love and she really wanted to convince haldir that she loves him and he loves her back but alas, Haldir's heart belongs to another. I hope to have the next update sometime tomorrow :) now that school hasnt been so crazy, i can focus on writing :)
Date: Jul 28 2011 05:36 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 - One Week Reviewer: Melusine Signed
Hmm . . . I wonder if Elwen will cause trouble. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Well..we'll see lol..thank you for reviewing :)
Date: Feb 16 2011 05:09 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 - The Bitter Proposal Reviewer: Melusine Signed
Oh dear, I see Lothestel has just gotten a nasty surprise! On to read more . . .

Author's Response: That is what you get for being hasty and too emotional :P
Date: Feb 16 2011 04:53 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 - The Bitter Proposal Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
"Don't be hasty!" Thats what I was thinking when she agreed! Can't wait to see what happens next! ~iggybaby

Author's Response: we've had times were our emotions sometimes rule our decisions. this was that moment for lothestel im afraid lol
Date: Feb 16 2011 09:41 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 - One Week Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I'm glad to see Haldir and Lothestel finally giving into their feelings for one another. Loved how he took her hand while they were walking and wanting her to walk by his side. Such an honorable elf. But now I'm worried about this Elwen. I'd really hoped she would want Beinion but now I see her as a real problem in the near future. You're weaving your web again aren't? Nicely done. Hope you can update again soon.

Author's Response: keeping it a secret :) but come on..its too early in the story to have a happy ending :P
Date: Feb 16 2011 09:25 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 - Decision to Journey Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
A bitter sweet chapter. More sweet than bitter though, I liked it :D ~iggybaby

Author's Response: thank you :) bitter sweet would be the word
Date: Feb 16 2011 09:07 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 - By Chance Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
Hahahaha that was totally unexpected! Wow how embarassing for Lothestel! That was a very romantic scene with Legolas and Nyonna too! Good work! ~iggybaby

Author's Response: I think i intentionally have legolas's and nyonna's romance play out side by side to haldir's and lothestel's just to show the contrast of the two..but both will show the true meaning of unrelenting love :)
Date: Feb 16 2011 08:26 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 - By Chance Reviewer: Melusine Signed
Woops! lol I guess Lothestel will be more careful next time.

Author's Response: Well, her i am better than anyone else's attitude will get her into more trouble lol
Date: Feb 15 2011 10:45 am [Report This]
Title: Prologue Reviewer: Melusine Signed
Interesting beginning!

Author's Response: Thank You :) i'm happy to be seeing you here
Date: Feb 15 2011 10:38 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 - One Week Reviewer: regaliaria Anonymous
I missed this story. For a moment there I thought you disappeared. I thought maybe Haldir found a portal and took you back to Middle Earth itself, to do the same things he was intimately doing to Lothestel! LOL! (Don't we all wish hey!!) This was a great chapter and they are finally coming together. That is if Elwen, doesn't cause any troubled delays. Hurry up with the next chp. (lol!) If ya disappear again, I will find that portal and come after. Not for you tho. For one of those hot elves. hehehe.

Author's Response: Lol..i wish that was the case. School has been especially hard. But I am on a two week break. So lets hope i can update faster. I am in the middle of the next chapter. Hopefully something will be posted tomorrow. Well things will get shaky. After all this is called UNrelenting love. How unrelenting would itbe if everything's settled in the first 10 chapter? hehehe thanks for the review my friend. it is now time for me to catch up on my reading :)
Date: Feb 14 2011 11:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 - Truth Will Out Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You are such a freakin' tease. Hey, welcome back again. Nice to see the update. Hope all is well with you. This was very hot and frustrating (mean that in a good way). Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm sorry to be such a tease... lol u know me..its good to be back..*sighs it seems nowadays all i have time for is to post the stories and respond to reviews...I really want to read some of the new stories u wrote but man...time is envious
Date: Nov 19 2010 07:25 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 - Truth Will Out Reviewer: regaliaria Anonymous
OH YES! YES! YES! And that was for the chapter. LOL! you had me there on cloud 9 then all of a sudden it was like someone pulled the chair from underneath me or put cold ice down my pants. Woo! Ice cold honey,ice cold! Rofl. Anyways it looks like they are about to "CUM" together ...someday. Can't wait to see this wedding come together. She really should forgive her brother, because she may need him yet. love it!

Author's Response: Things will get messy before that lol... You know me. You know how i like to spoil things for ya!thanks for the review, i will try my best for the next chapter by this weekend
Date: Nov 18 2010 06:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 - The Bitter Proposal Reviewer: haldirsbaby Anonymous
Bravo mellon, though i wish i was Lothestel..To have Haldir...ah,,what a dream..Great Chapter...

Author's Response: owh, i didnt get a notification for this. thanks for reading along :) yes, having haldir would be a dream come true

Author's Response: owh, i didnt get a notification for this. thanks for reading along :) yes, having haldir would be a dream come true
Date: Oct 23 2010 07:36 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 - The Bitter Proposal Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I completely agree with regalaria and say welcome home. I hope you will find some time to post more. We have missed you, but I totally understand. School comes first of course. Great chapter. Finally, the word is out. She is going to have a cow and kill Haldir. *hehe* Such tension coming up. Can't wait to see what happens next. (Lots of yelling, maybe some smacking and then some hot 'hate myself for loving you' sex?) A girl can dream can't she.

Author's Response: Lol..if only life was that simple :) thanks for the review. I have missed you guys and i am looking forward to reading your new work. Just hope that time will be on my side with school work and all
Date: Oct 19 2010 06:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 - The Bitter Proposal Reviewer: regaliaria Anonymous
And then she faints! Hahaha. Well whatever happens next, most likely will not be a pleasant one. I am so happy to see you have finally posted. It is like you have come home to the family,and we are all joyous. I cannot wait to see how this arranged marriage goes. What will it be? Who knows. Only the author knows. LOL. So good to see you here again. Please continue. Loving this story very much.

Author's Response: I am glad the welcome has been generous. I have been itching to write these few weeks but school is crazy. As with all arranged marriaged, getting to know ur partner is everything. but it will be harder than you think because we are talking about haldir and lothestel here
Date: Oct 19 2010 05:40 pm [Report This]
Title: Prologue Reviewer: haldirsbaby Anonymous
WOW..That was good! but bad bad haldir for treating her like that...Damn Elwen to mordor..

Cant wait to hear from you.

Author's Response: Sorry for not being on for awhile. Finally getting some internet connection. will try to be online soon :)
Date: Sep 21 2010 01:12 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 - The treaty and some Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Hey my review buddy is back! You have missed a lot of great stories. I hope you get a chance to catch up on some of them, especially Melusine and ladyjane (and mine). I know, I'm shameless. I've finished Guardian and have started on a new story, Magic Man. And you must check out Deeper than Breathing by ziggy. Her work is outstanding. Glad to see your update. I am longing for Haldir and Lothestel to have a fiery affair but I'm sure the journey there will be worth the wait. Welcome back mellon nin. You have been greatly missed, both your reviews and your stories.

Author's Response: on my phone now..i know..i missed a lot of story..wish i could catch up soon. thanks for sticking out for this story!
Date: Sep 18 2010 02:26 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 - Decision to Journey Reviewer: regaliaria Anonymous
Hello. Sorry I have not reviewed lately. Have been very busy and a little of life's obstacles got in the way. Anyways I am here. Loved the Last two Chapters and I whole heartedly agree with reviewer *Lady Jane?* But now I await your next chapter, which I hopefully hope is soon. Love this story.

Author's Response: on my phone right now... thank you for sticking out to read this story! i hope to update soon :)
Date: Sep 14 2010 12:15 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 - Tragedy in Mirkwood Reviewer: ladyjane Anonymous
This is tragic indeed. Legolas and Haldir should go Orc hunting!
You know, I can see the beautiful values of your eastern culture in your writing, though your writing is often erotic and adult, I have noticed your sense of family order and fidelity through out. Your feminine characters are sensual yet chaste. I feel this is quality that might make them even more beautiful to the men, Elven or mortal, who finally win them.
I will be reading the rest of this if at all possible. As I told L8, I simply cannot imagine how you and she complete daily chapters with words in the several thousand. I just cannot fathom how you do it.

Author's Response: thank you for saying that. i try to infuse the sense of family. I love the idea of being loyal to our significant other and i do say my eastern culture does influence my work. thank you or saying so my dear. i hope to finish this and have u read it until the end :)
Date: Aug 27 2010 10:30 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 - Payback Backfired Reviewer: ladyjane Anonymous
A fine line between love and hate isn't there?

You just love to tie Haldar up don't you?

Your Haldar is such a gentleman, though he may not wish to be.

And you have painted a vivid picture of Lothestel, body and spirit.

Author's Response: Yup we have all been there... hate and love have a very fine line...Lol i love to tie Haldir up huhu. He is a gentleman but when someone pushes the right buttons he'll be slightly frisky haha...thanks for the review!
Date: Aug 27 2010 03:21 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 - Decision to Journey Reviewer: haldirsbaby Anonymous
good chapter...cant wait for more

Author's Response: thank you my friend..more will come soon
Date: Aug 26 2010 11:02 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 - Decision to Journey Reviewer: teacalm Signed
Looks like Haldir will be just the right person to comfort Lothestel...thinking wicked thoughts here.

Author's Response: Hmm...i hate to crush ur wicked thoughts but no...things will get pretty messy soon..thanks for the review
Date: Aug 26 2010 11:01 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 - Decision to Journey Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Oh Las! Oh yes Las! Let me tell you, this Legolas pairing is driving me wild (in a good way) He is after all my favorite. Let's hurry on to Lorien. Can't wait to see what happens when Lothestel sees Haldir again.

Author's Response: Im glad you loved the pairing. I like to think legolas as a romantic tender lover...i try to portray him like that here...i hope it comes across that way...
Date: Aug 26 2010 07:20 am [Report This]
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