Reviews For I, Nienna
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Reviewer: Melusine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/08/10 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this too! Nicely done insight into Nienna's mind.

Author's Response: Thank you Melusine. I can hardly express how much I admire your writing. I am grateful you take the time to read. I do like this myself. Nienna weeps from rage *and* sorrow.

Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/10 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very amazing and powerful! Eru is all-knowing, and God. He is merciful and kind, but the other Valar are not as perfect... I love her anger. Very well portrayed!

Author's Response: Thanks Nessa. I think the torture Elves must have endured to morph to orcs one of the greatest crimes and if the Valar loved the elves this must have grieved them greatly.

Reviewer: ziggy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/10 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1

This gave me shivers. I love that Nienna is angrier than Eru and less forgiving, and the final line is pure genius.

Author's Response: Thank you Zigmaster! I bow to the prowess of your pen. You are one of the great ones (bows with hand on heart). HOW DARE anyone mess with an Elf to the point of actually getting them to embrace Orchood. Again there is a sad story here. I've tried, but just cannot get it to come out. The story would be horrible also. I've thought of writing it to the brink, then having my Character rescued. I would love to see you expand on this.

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/08/10 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Powerful! You showed so beautifully her great sorrow and compassion. Her tears are for every one of Iluvatar's children. Very nice. ^^

Author's Response: Thanks Kit, The valar are difficult to write!

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