Superb poem, soft, light and endearing!
You have a deft pen, I'm heading to read your other pieces ;)
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad this piece sparked ur interest. I hope to have u read my other pieces :)
This was absolutely beautiful. It's like you were in my head. Thank you so much for responding. I can just imagine Orophin out on the borders and thinking of Ethiriel. He remembers the piece of paper she gave him and takes it out. His heart swoons to know she loves him too. Great, wonderful, I just can't say enough.
Author's Response: Aww...i am glad you liked it. It just something to compliment your great story :)