Reviews For Sunkissed Meadows
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Reviewer: tinara Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/10 - 12:11 pm Title: Metamorphosis

It's an interesting beginning. I'm curious to see if she (I assume) can keep her human memories or if she'll be lost in this new body.
Perhaps you can check the use of the tenses again. Sometimes you switch from past to present and it confuses the reader a bit.
Tinara

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I always have trouble with tenses... and they are very confusing to the reader. Anyway, I'm glad you find the story interesting and I hope I can continue making it so, thanks again, fUnKy

Reviewer: eomerbear Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/10 - 06:04 am Title: Metamorphosis

wow....... I'm speechless, that was, that was... wow. I loved it! Thoroughly enjoyed it fUnKyToEs! I hope you add more to it, 'cos I'm now a fan of this story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it, I'll definitely write more now! fUnKy

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