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Title: The Contest Reviewer: Melusine Signed
Lovely, sweet first kiss. I think the sparks are building!

Author's Response: Sparks, fireworks, nuclear bombs... that's how I imagine those lips lol
Date: Nov 19 2010 04:52 am [Report This]
Title: The Contest Reviewer: Domestic Duchess Signed
I think you have an excellent sense of pacing. something i'm very envious of. Great cliff hanger and I'm excited to see the possible development of a sub plot! I love that she calls him by his last name! I'm normally not a huge fan of author intrusion, but if we look at this from the point of story telling and with in the scope of the story (especially since Tolkien was essentially retelling and "translating" the orginial stories) I actually find that it is not inappropriate at all. And it's really so inconsequential it would not deter me from reading on!! How in gods name do you kick these out so fast?!!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks Duchess. You know, I wasn't sure about her name for him. I was afraid it might seem a little to juvenille as an author. But Rhav is sassy. She can't stand him and to call him by his proper name just wasn't enough sometimes. I envisioned her calling him something demeaning to his royal standing but not degrating. And I hate the Greenleaf thing. But I know Thranduilion, though not a last name, was not a proper way to refer to a Prince either. I'm glad you think it works.
Date: Nov 18 2010 05:48 pm [Report This]
Title: Bait and Switch Reviewer: Domestic Duchess Signed
Uh oh! Things are gonna heat up!!

Author's Response: Oh yes they are.
Date: Nov 18 2010 05:37 pm [Report This]
Title: Not This Day Reviewer: Ninarika Signed
I love this story and can't wait for the next chapters..

Author's Response: Hello Ninarika. I see you are new to the site and say welcome. I am very glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you so much for reading and even more for reviewing. I hope to keep you interested.
Date: Nov 18 2010 02:40 pm [Report This]
Title: The Contest Reviewer: regaliaria Anonymous
Well I had to take time these past two days and read all eight chapters. I have been fairly busy these past two weeks. Many things happening including to false labors from my son on his second child. (Geez!) But anyways I am living this story too, like all the others. I like this *Love hate*, but only this time it started out *Hate love* relationship. Ah, the little games elfling's play. Foreplay? Well it all proved in the end ( or not) that they really had a buried hot's for each other. If they had not been interrupted this last chapter, they would have been burned to a love cinder. Who knows where they may have gone. (yeah right) But at least they did not kill each other before they even got to explore each other. Maybe very soon. But I got kind of an idea, where you where going with the part where the mothers were going on a short trip. To bad if it turns out to be a tragedy. I hope not. Anyways. Next chp please.

Author's Response: Hello my dear regaliaria. It is good to see you back here. I have missed your reviews. I am such a sucker for the love/hate thing and this is a steamy bumpy hell of a ride these two will go on. I do throw in a little bit of the original works into this so your perception may be right. But it is another turning point. Love and life are not easy. My best to your family, especially that new bundle of joy.
Date: Nov 18 2010 10:21 am [Report This]
Title: Bait and Switch Reviewer: Melusine Signed
Those two need to be locked up in a room somewhere. Where's Elrohir when you need him? ;-) But seriously, they're young, and they have a lot of growing to do. It's going to be a bumpy ride for them, that's for certain. I love your secondary characters as well.

Another wonderful update, dear!

Author's Response: Thanks Mel. Completely agree about Elrohir. He is the key master *hehe* But I'm afraid at this point, Leg and Rhav might kill each other if left unsupervised.
Date: Nov 17 2010 06:04 am [Report This]
Title: Begetting Day Invitation Reviewer: Domestic Duchess Signed
LOL! sloppy seconds! I love it! If she would have said that any other way it wouldn't have been so biting.

Author's Response: Thanks. I heard her in my head saying this to him
Date: Nov 14 2010 07:42 am [Report This]
Title: Begetting Day Invitation Reviewer: ziggy Signed
Rhavaniel doesn't really seem at all enamoured with Legolas- very cool and in control, whereas he seems quite sweetly determined to woo her. That show she put on was very sophisticated and I have ended up feeling quite sorry for Legolas!! He doesnt have a chance and she may end up breaking his heart! She is too suspicious of him- the recommendation was quite genuine after all but she seems determined to suspect him.

Author's Response: Rhavaniel and Legolas are too wrapped up in their training and besting each other to know what might be slowly boiling under the surface. I like to think that the female is much better at hiding her feelings than the male. Legolas might act like he is not interested but he can't hide it as well. It might be his downfall eventually.
Date: Nov 14 2010 12:25 am [Report This]
Title: The Dance Reviewer: ziggy Signed
Ah- so there you go! Poor Antien- don't think he has much chance really. And we all know why Legolas walked away so quickly- surprised he could walk at all probably!!

Author's Response: You don't know how far from the truth that is (about Antien). Haha, Legolas would have to work very hard not to walk with a limp.
Date: Nov 14 2010 12:19 am [Report This]
Title: Game Over Reviewer: Domestic Duchess Signed
You do such a good job of building suspense and wanting to make the reader anxious to read the next word, the next sentence, the next paragraph. I'm really liking these two!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Duchess. I really like these two also. Rhavaniel has grown on me so much. I think she is what I wish I could be. Glad you are still enjoying this tale.
Date: Nov 12 2010 06:09 pm [Report This]
Title: What's In A Name Reviewer: Melusine Signed
Looks like she's going to give Legolas a difficult time now that she's bested him, but I can't picture him willingly surrendering often. Poor guy, even a prince will probably have to put up with some ribbing over an elleth getting the upper hand.

Author's Response: And it's not over yet. She is going to compete with him again but with a goal. He may be a Prince but he cannot control everything.
Date: Nov 09 2010 07:31 am [Report This]
Title: What's In A Name Reviewer: Domestic Duchess Signed
i think what i'm liking about this story is the conflict. I don't ever think i've ever read a story about two people who conflict is that they are highly competetive and have a need to outdo each other. It is a unique and clever idea.

Author's Response: They will feel a certain animosity toward each other as long as their pride and passion for being the best gets in the way. They are young yet.
Date: Nov 08 2010 06:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Legolas' Thorn Reviewer: Domestic Duchess Signed
I think this one is building into somehting big. you've got envy and dislike, friction, tension betweent these two. Great for building conflict, which always makes characters more interesting. I very much enjoy you writing voice. You are a storyteller, instead of a writer, and that's what I want to read. If the characters are believible and I can bond withthem, any crazy stuff that happens I will believe. Writers are boring. Storytellers are facinating. And believe me that's a compliment cause ordinarily I would never read anything having to do with elves. I just dont' get them...Ever thought about writing category romance? I think you would be good at it. Very good. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you for such an encouraging review Duchess. I'm am always glad to see someone try something new. You are not the first to ask about the romance thing. I love doing romance and conflict and I hope it comes through in my stories. Maybe some day I can expand on it. For now, this is good practice. The world of writing is very new to me and reviews like yours revitalize me, especially when I'm starting something new.
Date: Nov 07 2010 05:22 am [Report This]
Title: Not This Day Reviewer: AmberRoseEm Signed
It is a short start so I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: It's so nice to see you have joined in for another adventure. Yes, it was a short chapter, but trust me, there is much more to come. It's difficult to review at such an early stage. Thanks for reading.
Date: Nov 05 2010 07:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Not This Day Reviewer: ziggy Signed
Like the very convincing irritation a young Legolas has for a new baby who is cramping his style!!

Author's Response: She will cramp his style more than once. Thanks for reading.
Date: Nov 05 2010 02:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Not This Day Reviewer: Melusine Signed
They definitely haven't gotten off to a good start. hehe I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Author's Response: They will butt heads. That's for sure
Date: Nov 05 2010 11:46 am [Report This]
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