Wow. I'm speechless, this was... amazing, truly. For such a short story it was so powerful and made me cry! I never cry! But I did because of this story. It was just beautiful, the raw emotion, hope and love in this story was one of the loveliest pieces I have ever read. Thank you for a great story :)
Author's Response: wow. that really means a lot to me. I actually have been told i have two sides to my personality: one is a happy, bubbly me, and the other is a dark and serious side. this story reflects the serious side. my other story, "one" is the bubbly one. weird, right?
Reviews For The Last Breath
Title: The Last Breath Reviewer: frodo_luv Signed
thanks :) I've been thinking about this idea for years, and I just now found out about this fanfiction site. -___- Wow.
Date: 05/01/11 - 03:51 pm [Report This]
Title: The Last Breath Reviewer: Masked Signed
Good story... but sad. Very unique. =)
Date: 04/01/11 - 06:58 pm [Report This]