A very evil cliffhanger ...
Anyway, still love the story!
But I'm afraid that the situation could not have been worse for Glorfindel to declare his love ... Erestor in his rage might just use this against him. Deadlocked situation. Curious if you'll bring it to a happy end...
Author's Response: I guess you'll just have to wait and see :) (supposed to be an evil smile, but it didn't work :D)
I still think that Erestor was wrong to pretend to be his twin at the wedding, but Glorfindel over-reacted so badly that perhaps now they are even. And the death of Ecthelion has left them both very alone. Especially now, since so much time has passed since the tragedy at Gondolin. Perhaps they can make a fresh start!
I must say I nearly stopped reading, finding Glorfindel's behaviour during the last chapters unforgivable and ... cowardly.
But this chapter was really good, reminding your readers that all of them are still adolescent.
So ... I'm going to continue reading, if you continue to write ;-)
Wow. If I was Ecthelion I would never talk to Glorfindel again, or maybe once just to say: 'you tried to force me into marrying you because you didn't have the guts to approach me and now you dare to rant and rave when I turn the tables?! And don't you dare to ever get near me or my brother again.'
Honestly ... I am very curious how you're going to fix that mess.
Anyway love the story, finally something different again. And hate you for letting us poor souls wait so long for the rest ... ;-)
O...m..g.. I thought Glorfindel suggested it, but I was surprised with the reaction! Right now I really feel for Glor. I mean knowing the one you love went through great lengths not to be with you would break my heart too :(