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Title: Confrontation II Reviewer: Massanie Signed
Huh, that went ... better than I thought it would: I was afraid Erestor would start to mock Glorfindel. He really has grown bitter, not that I would fault him... personally I think that there are crimes that cannot be forgiven, and Glorfindel’s actions in Gondolin were really close to that.

But it was an excellent chapter, the characters are more realistic than in most stories I’ve read so far; although Glorfindel’s change of heart was rather drastic in my opinion. I would so like to read his version of the last months of his former life and maybe some thoughts of his time in Mandos, just to understand *why* he has changed so much...

Author's Response: And I certainly plan to do so. Those chapters are in the process of being written and the details will soon come out. Keep reading.... and reviewing :D
Date: 09/13/11 06:38 pm [Report This]
Title: Confrontation II Reviewer: You Me and Obsession Signed
I almost squealed to see this updated.
I would love to comment on every chapter, but you see, the heartbreak often renders me speechless. I love the way it progresses soooooooo very slowly; it allows much space to imagine the moment Erestor will forgive Glorfindel, and I love the change you made to Glorfindel, how he grew wiser with his old (as dust) age, but above all I love the pain.
And, just a suggestion on Sindarin. It's "Le melin" for "I love you", not just a word by word translation of the sentence.

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for your response, I always love it when I receive a review, particularly a good one as this. I have always disliked stories where couples overcome a tragedy really quickly, no matter its importance. Dragging it out a little is more realistic to me and it allows a better insight into the characters. P.s. There are loads of different versions of phrases on the internet, from council of elrond, to undomiel pages. I simply chose one that appeared the most. I guess only tolkien will know the real answer i suppose. Thank you anyway
Date: 09/13/11 06:00 am [Report This]
Title: Hidden Torment Reviewer: Melda Signed
Well, Glorfindel certainly has the tables turned on him, now it's his turn to be heartbroken...ah well, wouldn't wish that on anybody. But great job with this chapter! :D
Date: 09/09/11 02:53 am [Report This]
Title: Hidden Torment Reviewer: Massanie Signed
A very evil cliffhanger ...
Anyway, still love the story!
But I'm afraid that the situation could not have been worse for Glorfindel to declare his love ... Erestor in his rage might just use this against him. Deadlocked situation. Curious if you'll bring it to a happy end...

Author's Response: I guess you'll just have to wait and see :) (supposed to be an evil smile, but it didn't work :D)
Date: 09/06/11 07:20 am [Report This]
Title: Ice Reviewer: Gwaelinn Signed
Turn about might be fair play, but I am really starting to feel for Fin! So well written, I can feel the chill in the air! More please...this has to get resolved!
~G
Date: 08/29/11 12:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Ice Reviewer: ebbingnight Signed
Well, now Erestor has had his revenge on Glorfindel, with the cruel words he's said. They're even now: but that doesn't matter it any better, does it!
Date: 08/29/11 01:20 am [Report This]
Title: Fatigue Reviewer: Gwaelinn Signed
Awesome as ever! Please keep it coming...glad i know where else to find you as I am bidding this site a sad goodbye.
Date: 08/04/11 02:47 am [Report This]
Title: Fatigue Reviewer: Melda Signed
Awwwww. Poor 'Restor. He's so sad.
Date: 08/04/11 02:42 am [Report This]
Title: The Return Reviewer: ebbingnight Signed
I still think that Erestor was wrong to pretend to be his twin at the wedding, but Glorfindel over-reacted so badly that perhaps now they are even. And the death of Ecthelion has left them both very alone. Especially now, since so much time has passed since the tragedy at Gondolin. Perhaps they can make a fresh start!
Date: 08/01/11 03:24 pm [Report This]
Title: The Return Reviewer: Melda Signed
Grrrr. Glorfindel was mean and he should feel bad! Then again, he *was* in love, I guess. But that doesn't excuse his behavior! :) Loved the chapter and can't wait for the next.
Date: 07/31/11 10:59 pm [Report This]
Title: Reminiscing Reviewer: Melda Signed
Keep going please! This is such a wonderful story. I can't wait to read what happens next!
Date: 07/25/11 03:34 am [Report This]
Title: Reminiscing Reviewer: Gwaelinn Signed
AAk! A Cluiffie...noooo!!! Please up date soon--this is a favorite of mine :)
~G
Date: 07/24/11 09:39 pm [Report This]
Title: Pain Reviewer: Massanie Signed
I must say I nearly stopped reading, finding Glorfindel's behaviour during the last chapters unforgivable and ... cowardly.

But this chapter was really good, reminding your readers that all of them are still adolescent.

So ... I'm going to continue reading, if you continue to write ;-)
Date: 06/26/11 03:03 am [Report This]
Title: Pain Reviewer: danira Signed
omg poor twins..i hope glorfindel will see his mistake and come to erestor to apologise.....cant wait to read more
Date: 06/19/11 11:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Pain Reviewer: Gwaelinn Signed
Oh wow what a turn of events! I feel for them and I love Thel's protective nature. Hard to wait for more...please update soon :)
~G
Date: 06/19/11 07:20 pm [Report This]
Title: Discovery Reviewer: Massanie Signed
Wow. If I was Ecthelion I would never talk to Glorfindel again, or maybe once just to say: 'you tried to force me into marrying you because you didn't have the guts to approach me and now you dare to rant and rave when I turn the tables?! And don't you dare to ever get near me or my brother again.'
Honestly ... I am very curious how you're going to fix that mess.

Anyway love the story, finally something different again. And hate you for letting us poor souls wait so long for the rest ... ;-)
Date: 06/15/11 03:06 am [Report This]
Title: Discovery Reviewer: danira Signed
omg......glorfindel is really brutal.why didnt he listen and let erestor explain. i mean he is realy in love with him and not his twin...arg stupid
Date: 06/14/11 04:59 am [Report This]
Title: Long- ago Reviewer: Anels3 Signed
O...m..g.. I thought Glorfindel suggested it, but I was surprised with the reaction! Right now I really feel for Glor. I mean knowing the one you love went through great lengths not to be with you would break my heart too :(
Date: 06/13/11 10:40 pm [Report This]
Title: Discovery Reviewer: Gwaelinn Signed
Ack! Such the cliff hanger!! I stumbled on this fic cause I
love Thel! WOW is all I can say...I'm hooked so don't leave me hanging for long. Poor...well, all of them!
Date: 06/13/11 08:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Discovery Reviewer: ebbingnight Signed
Well, I saw this coming, even if the twins didn't! Glorfindel is right in being furious: this deception was beyond wrong.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 06/13/11 11:46 am [Report This]
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