Hey Kitt!
Oh come on! It wasn't that bad of a poem! :D I actually like it... It flows nicely and the metaphors really work together. Although I am kinda at a lost at who this poem is supposed to be about..... :P

Author's Response: Hi Beol!!! Aw, thank ya…*full-face blush* Posting poetry embarrasses the (um, otter?) out of me. I always hope nobody notices. :P I guess it's about one of the exiled Noldo who sided with Feanor at the Kinslaying of Alqualonde... Truth be told, it was based on some Japanese lyrics and twisted to make it Middle-earthish. Big on natural metaphors, those Japanese... How you’ve been?? Going to be posting here again soon? I don’t think I have your ff.net name. I feel bad that I haven’t been able to keep up, but now I have more freetime than I ought to for a beginning-of-the-term... Email’s still kitt_of_lindon! *hugs* Kitt