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Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter 2

My favourite line: "Hurry! Gather the fellowship! I fear for Aragron!" For some reason I found it very funny! Maybe becuase I imagnined he said it with a mouth full of pie :D ~iggybaby

Author's Response: Dude, that was so funny! It looks hilarious in my head! ~Predy96

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/11 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1

The story is quite good for it being a first timer! I just found it confusing with the switching of places with Aragorn and Gandalf; maybe you could use some sort of symbol to divide it up? And don't be nervous! Everyone starts somewhere and everyone keeps on improving as they write more and more! ~iggybaby

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! Thank you so much! I will use something to divide it up. Thank you for your support! You rock! ~Predy96

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