Reviews For Silver Lining
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Title: Birth Reviewer: Gilraen999 Signed
An excellent start to a story. I cannot wait to read more
Date: 21/10/12 - 12:59 am [Report This]
Title: Birth Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
Hee hee! "This is woman's work" I loved that line! I also think you portrayed the king's anxiety as a father and husband very well. I liked it! Keep writing! ~iggybaby

Author's Response: Haha thank you. I love Fantasy Midwives xD I am glad you think I am going well. Thanks for the review! ~Nessa
Date: 16/02/11 - 06:59 am [Report This]
Title: Birth Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
Awaste of time?! Heck, no! This is a good start. Please continue.

I have only one small criticism. In private, Arwen would address her husband as Estel, not Elessar.

Author's Response: *phew* thank you for your confidence! And thank you for catching that. It shall be attended to!
Date: 14/02/11 - 08:24 am [Report This]
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