When something like this happens again I don't care if you do live half a world apart you must seize the moment and be bold. It is the only way to live and if you do you will not regret it. Beautiful poem.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Lisse. And thankyou for the advice. I'll be sure to heed it if this ever happens again :D
This is a lovely, sweet poem. I certainly hope you someday find a fellow like this who will fulfill your heart's desires.
Author's Response: Thankyou for the review! And thanks for the encouragement haha maybe one day...
Aw that's super sad but awesome! You're really good at poetry! haha oh would u mind reviewing mine if u get a chance? any of my stories really i just want reviews! Haha
Author's Response: Hi there, Sorry it's taken me so long to reply and thanks for your review. I've just picked a random story of yours to review, I think it's one of your older ones. I will eventually get around to reading the rest of your stuff but it looks promising so far. I've left a review for you and will review others as I go (I'm a chronic reviewer. It can actually be in a pain in the neck for some but hey, I like my opinion known). Anyways good luck and you'll hear from me soon. ~ Iri
Wow. So sad. I loved it! Very beautiful and heartwarming. I adore poetry and I write it often. It's great to find someone who can write in verse as well as you can!
Author's Response: Thanks Melda! I don't usually break out into sonnets and have lyrics buzzing around my head, but I love to read and be touched and inspired by others. So post some of your stuff up share : D Thanks for the review and I look forward to reading more from you! - Iri
So bitter sweet! I know how you feel! This thing actually happene to me too, with the piano and all! Except I don't live a world apart, more like a few towns apart. Same feelings though. My favourite part was the refrain. Sometimes the less is said the more meaning it has. ~iggybaby
Author's Response: How horrible is the feeling?? But I feel for you. At least I have a world between us. It would be harder when you know they're closer. Thanks for the review! x x