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Reviewer: Spiced Wine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/06/11 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

No, of course I don't mind if you message me. I'm happy to help if I can. :) Just use the contact button at the top of my bio, and I will email you back. I hope you enjoy the Silmarillion, it's a dark and tragic book, but beautiful. :)

Reviewer: Spiced Wine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/06/11 - 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, such things are easily done. I once started writing about some-one who was dead, just because I forgot the timeline XD
I hope you write more, because you packed such pathos and emotion into this fic, and I would like to read more work. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely reviews and response, Im reading The Silmarillion right now, and already the wheels are turning in my head for a new fic, so I'm gonna wait till I finish and then plan it. If I get stuck, would you mind if I messaged you for help? If it's a bother, It's fine, but it would be lovely to have your input :) Thank you again!

Reviewer: Spiced Wine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/06/11 - 08:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Hiya. :) I really enjoyed this, and I think your writing style has great depth, which I personally think is vital to a good story. Beregond's despair and guilt are harsh and pitiless, and the sex is raw and uncompromising.

I would just mention and heir to the throne, Boromir. that Aragorn is the heir to the throne. d;-) The Stewards of Gondor always refused to take the throne, and their seats were actually at the foot of the steps that lead up to the throne. Boromir would have been heir to the Seat of the Stewards, but I am guessing that is what you meant.

This is a wonderful first fic. keep writing, and have fun.

Author's Response: :D Thank you so so much for reviewing, means so much to me! Thanks for pointing that out to me, it seems pretty obvious now, but I guess I just got carried away ;) Thanks again for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D -Becky.

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