This is my first review, so hopefully I won't babble. Loved this story so much I read the entire thing in a weekend, including an all nighter!(Hmmm...probably not the best thing to do on a phone.) The plot had me totally hooked and I really enjoyed your style of writing. Keep up the good work!
I kind of suspected it to be Elros because the prophecy speaks of a twin, which means only one, so it made sense to me, though I doubted it as Elros was human.
But it was still a nice surprise for Elrond to have his borther back, born in Imladris no less.
I especially liked the idea of Haldir and Valerie being intimate when they shouldn't and Haldir looking like a child caught doing something that it shouldn't.
And before I forget it, I love to see what becomes of Erestor and Emily, THAT thought has never entered my mind, but the idea is great.
Hello it's me (again).
I loved this chapter, especially the fact that Valerie was brave enough to go to Mirkwood without Haldir and her other children.
I think going to Mirkwood was a good experience for Valerie and all Mirkwood inhabitants. I really look forward to what she will accomplish in Imladris.
I just made read count 2,201 =)
The visit to Rohan was different from what I expected but hey, they got what they wanted. And I expect another elfling in a year after Haldir and Valerie concluded their visit to Rohan with a night of passion.
You may have read between the lines ... I cannot wait for the next chapter
I love this story.
The idea itself is something different leaves much room for speculation who the other reborn heroes will be.
Your style of writing makes it easy to read and follow what is going on.
But I have a question: are you having this story beta-read? There are some minor spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing that makes the story incomprehensible.
Author's Response: Thank you for your nice comment. To answer your question, I do not have a beta-reader. Unfortunately, I do not know anyone in the fanfiction world, and English is my second language, which is probably the cause of the minor grammar issues here and there... Annielle
WOW...another great one Mellon, please update..I am so needing another fix on this one...I just love haldir...if i had a kid with him, I would not question it...hehe...
Loved the kids response *Ada, you look like shit* that is so funny...and the fact the elves thought it funny,,,well that just added to the piece of pie...Good work!
In most of the places where Galadriel says she is "Formal" I think the word you wanted was "convinced". There are also some other english usage mistakes. I enjoy your story but you need to get someone to proof-read your work before you post.
Hello...been following your story for a short while now...since its beginning...and finally decided to get an account so that i can review it...I love it very much...I love haldir and find that your story is quite interesting...looking forward to more..please update soon...huggles
Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. Stay tuned, there will be a lot going on in the next chapters! Annielle
Wonderful! Anything with the Marchwarden I would be happy to read. I await the next chapters eagerly to see this arranged bonding. Your story is slightly similar to mine in terms of concept. Might i make a small suggestion? Between the dialogues lines, could u perhaps add some spacing? Makes it easier to read and follow :) Good job indeed :)
Author's Response: Done! Thank you for the tip!