Hello Uvatha the Horseman,
an intriguing story. I'm not sure that Sauron would feel as much repentance as he does here, but who knows? Either way, I felt genuinely sorry for him as he struggeled between panic at and acceptance of his doom. And the last two words of the final chapter - simple though they were - chilled my blood. I can't believe I felt sorry for a Dark Lord (and particularly this Dark Lord), but I did, and that's says a lot about your skill with words.
Kara's Aunty ;)