I adore this story and cannot wait for you to add more chapters! I love your writing style and the relationship development between Aruiniel and Legolas is on point. It's refreshing to see that despite what she has been through in her past, your not writing her out as a victim. Even with Legolas coming into the picture and Aruiniel putting some walls down, it's not changing the integrity of the character and I like that a lot. She's still fiery and stubborn! I also really enjoy the relationship between Rhov and Aruiniel. They have such a deep connection and you can really feel it come through in your writing. Keep writing! Put up some more chapters soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
I absolutely love the development between Aruiniel and Legolas here. I can feel their trust in each other, and how they are finding the similarities within each other's stories. Good job with this. Keep it going.
I'm so glad you are reading the Outlander series and enjoying it. Diana Gabaldon is my absolute fav author. Her work is so inspiring. Did you know they are making a series on Starz? It is already in production and should begin sometime during 2014, though there is no definite date yet. Google it. You'll see the actors they have chosen to play the different parts. I can't wait to see Jamie and Claire on the screen. And another bit of info, in case you don't know, the next book will be out in June, Written in My Own Heart's Blood. Keep reading. Her story just gets better and better.
It's been such a while since I've read your story so I started it from the beginning again. Wonderfully written. I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Your OC's are all very well developed. Great plot and prose. I like the idea of rafters. Can't say I've ever seen that before. Please keep this story going. You've got something good here and a good fanfic writer is difficult to find.
It's nice to see an update from you. Good flashback to the sibling's childhood. I enjoying witnessing the closeness between them. Makes me feel like I know them a little better and on a personal level. You know, I've seen stories with healers, warriors, scribes and other employment, but never rafters. I really am enjoying it. It's unique and fits so well. You've got a nice story going here. Keep it up.
Well, I'm finally able to rest and review your chapter. Sorry it took me so long, but the holidays have kicked my behind this year. Anyways, this was such a lovely chapter showing everyone's goodbyes. You have all the emotions here and they are so real. It is difficult leaving loved ones and these last moments were very sweet, Aruiniel and her aunt and uncle, Rhov leaving his pregnant wife, Celuduin and a very sensuous morning, and even Celon (who btw I think I'm liking more and more). Great chapter and you have me wondering what Legolas is up to, assuming that's who you are talking about at the end. Can't wait for the next post.
This is very good for a first time fanfic. I like all of your characters and your setting. You've done a good job showing their different personalities. My only suggestion, and believe me I have been guilty of this more than my fair share, is to give them more physical description, hair, eyes, build, etc. I think it's difficult for us fanfic writers to do. I mean we can say Helm's Deep and everyone automatically knows what it looks like. To describe it feels unnecessary. Same goes for canon characters. So when we make up our own characters, it's easy to skip over their description. Like I said, I've done the same thing in the past. I really like your style of writing and look forward to more of this story. Please update soon. I'm anxious to see what happens. Very exciting stuff.