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Title: Chapter 1 Against the northern borders Reviewer: FrodoLuver1 Signed
Really good!!! LOved it! Write more! Hey can u check out my stuff no one's reviewed it at all and its making em think it sucks...
Date: 08/25/11 11:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Against the northern borders Reviewer: Gwaelinn Signed
Ack!! You can't stop there!! Hope for an update soon...very good start.
~G
Date: 08/19/11 03:39 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Against the northern borders Reviewer: delightfulmaiden Signed
This is a good story for being your first, but a word of advice. On some of your paragraphs they tend to run into other and no space there...Kind of confusing to read, but other than that...Well written Mellon...

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice :) I will fix the paragraphs and I'll also work on the clarity of the ideas in future stories!
Date: 08/18/11 01:08 am [Report This]
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