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Reviewer: ToriLee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/14 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter 1: Goheno Nin 'Forgive Me'

Heyyy. I see you haven't updated in a good while. I'd just like you to know that this story so far is very interesting. I love the fact that Uruviel isn't typical Mary Sue daughter of Elrond type. A few suggestions: watch your grammar and as few spelling issues as well as separating the dialogue so it flows easier for the reader. Other than that it's pretty well done. :)

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