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Reviewer: Daewen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/12/11 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1 - Life and Death

This has the good beginnings of a story. Focus on the feelings Legolas is having and then focus on how a father would take care of his daughter - alone. You've started doing that, just focus on those two things for right now and you'll be fine :)

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