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Title: Chapter 1 - Life and Death Reviewer: Daewen Signed
This has the good beginnings of a story. Focus on the feelings Legolas is having and then focus on how a father would take care of his daughter - alone. You've started doing that, just focus on those two things for right now and you'll be fine :)
Date: Dec 15 2011 12:37 am [Report This]
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