I'm completely biased as I almost automatically love any story regarding Eowyn and Faramir, but I enjoyed this first chapter. Hope you write more!
Author's Response: I really love this couple as well and I want to do them justice. I promise to write more soon. :)
It is very well structured and there's nothing wrong with your prose. I look forward to reading more from you :) ~ Iri
Author's Response: Thank you. I do plan to write more. I hope you keep reading! :)