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So good
I like how you portray Lorien. Very nice. :)
love this chptr i wish i could email u again
It's really good, but when a new person speaks, you should begin a new paragraph. It's lovely besides that and I don't know if you did this by accident, but it should be 'took' instead of 'toked'. I loved it and I will read more chapters later, Of course, I could beta it for you if you want, which would save a lot of trouble for you since you're already very busy. :D
Author's Response: I know I still suck at writing stories. I would like that very much. Its a habit of mine to had other people talking in one paragraph. I wont mind you being my beta.
sweeeeeeeeeet
Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks
This is good you should edit and make it better
Author's Response: I will later
Oh its natasa the lost princess I just know it
Author's Response: Maaaaybeeeeee you knows? I don't even know.
Luv the song you got it from anastasha... great idea
Author's Response: I know
OMG. Write more I loved it
Author's Response: Lol chapter three is almost done! :D