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Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 - 07:43 am Title: Chapter 10 beaten and bruised
Date: 09/04/12 - 07:43 am Title: Chapter 10 beaten and bruised
Hopefully she managed to take Paul down!
and where the hell is Eomer?
Author's Response: She friggin murdered him.
Don't worry Eomer will come to the rescue
Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 - 06:28 am Title: Chapter 10 beaten and bruised
Date: 09/04/12 - 06:28 am Title: Chapter 10 beaten and bruised
Intresting...the orcs are probably thinking that she has gone completely crazy...XD
Author's Response: That's the point but Korruk finds interesting not scary or mentally unstable
Reviewer: Irial Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
Date: 09/04/12 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
Oh no, don't be sorry! Like I said your concept is great, just needs a few structure and grammer pick ups to make it easier to read! Otherwise it's great. We are all new at this at some point and I found that advice from fellow authors and readers helped me along the way! My tales used to be a right mess don't worry! With practice it'll become easier! Keep going! ~ Iri
Author's Response: Aww so sweet. But chapter nine is gonna be great
Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/12 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 9 songs and poems
Date: 09/04/12 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 9 songs and poems
Love it! Very poetic! XO
Author's Response: It helps write the story XD
Reviewer: Irial Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
Date: 08/04/12 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
I'm with Melda - definitely more descriptions and a more easy-to-read layout would benefit this tale. I like the concept definitely but it's just a little hard to read. ~ Iri
Author's Response: Sorry I'm still new at this
Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter 8 memories
Date: 08/04/12 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter 8 memories
Love it! XD
Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 8 memories
Date: 08/04/12 - 02:21 am Title: Chapter 8 memories
Hey! Where is the rest?!! XD
Great chapter! XD
and thank you for posting up! :)
Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/12 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 6 stares and truths
Date: 07/02/12 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 6 stares and truths
That was an interesting twist in the story! Just please,try to make the chapters longer.
Canīt wait to see whatīs going to happen next! XD
Author's Response: Aww thnx Ill keep writting till the sun don shine in middle earth no more
Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/12 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 6 stares and truths
Date: 07/02/12 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter 6 stares and truths
Nice! XD
Author's Response: thnx
Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/12 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
Date: 05/02/12 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
Great story!Just add more detail. Cand wait for the next chapter! XD
Author's Response: im trying its going about slowly
Reviewer: Melda Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/12 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
Date: 02/02/12 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
The story has a good basic form, but you need to add more background and details as well as perhaps edit your pages a little more before you post. Or you could advertise for a beta, who would do that for you. Otherwise, it's pretty good.
Author's Response: thnx for the critizism
Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/12 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter 2 Jokes and truth
Date: 31/01/12 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter 2 Jokes and truth
Nice
Author's Response: Thnx
Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/12 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
Date: 31/01/12 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
That was for future chaps, muh girl.
Author's Response: Nice
Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/12 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
Date: 31/01/12 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter 1 spells of old
Make paragraphs longer add more paragraphs. More detail. I really should not be telling you this due to I suck and not that good.
Author's Response: Its only chapter one I had to get it started