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Reviewer: Peregrin Took Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/02/12 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Strange....oh well, good job!

Reviewer: Merciful_Faelwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/02/12 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Melda Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/02/12 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice, though there were a few gramatical mistakes. 'Spoked' is not a word. The proper form is spoke, but 'said' would have fit better in the context.

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