The storyline was nice. :) I think the whole idea of the story is great but your writing style didn't quite pull it off. Maybe next time you could make their dialogue/ lines more old english-y (just like in the books and in the movie) and you should describe the surroundings and setting more. Other than that, the story was great! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. :) Keep it up. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I do try and use the old eglish type stuff, but sometimes I forget. I will try and describe the settinggs more!
That was wonderful!!! XD
but what was it that Legolas were sayng to each other in sindarin?
Author's Response: Oh sorry, Goheno nin means forgive me and meleth nin means my love. And U moe edaved means there is nothing to forgive.
XD lol! Just dont get caught if you write the stories during classes! XD
Anyway, the chapters were beautiful as always! Please continue the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks you! And don't worry I dint do it during classes.
You hsould defenedly do a series!!!!!!!!!!
and I do not think that you should be worrying yourself about whether ather people will read it or not!!!! Your story is gread!!! Besides I have seen several gread stories thet did not have a single reviou, that dosent mean that they are not good!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I think I will try