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My favourite bit was the bit in italics. It was emotional but not too over the top, a trap that a lot of authors fall into. Well done, and looking forward to the next chapter! :D
I loved the ending; it sent my heart racing with adreneline! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Loving the longer chapters. :) Once again, I got excited at the end, because it means that there will be a battle in the next chapter! (I enjoy violence in stories...) :)
I got so excited at the Eowyn and Legolas kiss! (although I do think that they wouldn't be a good couple in real life, I still ship them!!!) Very well written, well done!
I love the last paragraph in this chapter. It was beautifully written and is true in many ways. :)
So far, this is my favourite chapter!
"My emotions are clouded, for though I do not love her, neither do I wish her to think ill of me." I think this really sums up how Legolas feels about Eowyn, and is brilliantly written. Well done!
Wow, love it! Simply Amazing!
That was very beautifull!!!!!!!!
You´re a true philosopher! (I should know,since I´ve grown up in Greece);D
Author's Response: Thank you once again! Sorry for the delay. :)
I do like philosophy...
Ther is no critic, atlist not from me! Just please continue the good work!!! XO XD
Author's Response: Thank you, once again. :)
Yayyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD XD
Good to know!!!
and yes, I do realize that I´m acting like a child! but I realy do like you´re story! XP
Okay... now I´m curious... XD
and it´s beautifully written, as always!!! XO
Just wanted to say: You are one of my favorites autors in this side! I wisch I would be only half as talented as you are! (bows to your talent!) XD
Author's Response: Oh my God... Thank you so much. :D You have made my day, seriously. I officially love you. *virtually hugs*
YOUHOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XD XD
Author's Response: Thanks again for reading. :)Chapter 3 should be up soon!
That was beutifull!!!!!!!!! Is there more?!!! XO XD
Author's Response: That's probably one of the kindest reviews I've ever had. Thank you so much- I'm really touched. :) Yes, there definitely is.