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OMG!!!! THEY'RE AT WAR!!!!! ACTION PLAN!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! *pauses to breathe* Now, like Orli said. I am going to be 'calm and collected'. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UDATING I WAITED SO LONG KEEP UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!! THEY'RE AT WAR!!!!! ACTION PLAN!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! *pauses to breathe* Now, like Orli said. I am going to be 'cool and calm'. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING I WAITED SO LONG KEEP UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!! THEY'RE AT WAR!!!!! ACTION PLAN!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! *pauses to breathe* Now, like Orli said. I am going to be 'cool and calm'. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING I WAITED SO LONG KEEP UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!! THEY'RE AT WAR!!!!! ACTION PLAN!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! *pauses to breathe* Now, like Orli said. I am going to be 'cool and calm'. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING I WAITED SO LONG KEEP UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!! THEY'RE AT WAR!!!!! ACTION PLAN!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! *pauses to breathe* Now, like Orli said. I am going to be 'calm and collected'. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UDATING I WAITED SO LONG KEEP UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!! THEY'RE AT WAR!!!!! ACTION PLAN!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! *pauses to breathe* Now, like Orli said. I am going to be 'calm and collected'. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UDATING I WAITED SO LONG KEEP UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've been sitting by the computer for days, waiting for you to update. Yay! They've finally been reunited! I hope Leah is okay....she has to be and they have to get married and have a baby;) it would be nice..…anyway I'll stop babbling. Keep writing!!! Beautiful story!!
Author's Response: THank you so much for your kind response. The full story is up on a forum I manage with my friend Faye, but I'll still be posting it here. There is a part two and I'm working on part three. http://orlandobloomfiction.theforum.name/index.php
I've been sitting by the computer for days, waiting for you to update. Yay! They've finally been reunited! I hope Leah is okay....she has to be and they have to get married and have a baby;) it would be nice..…anyway I'll stop babbling. Keep writing!!! Beautiful story!!
Okay, this Ashley girl? She means trouble. And serious trouble. I think I instantly disliked her. I hope Orlando doesn't fall for her tricks, but...
Great job so far!
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. I had mistakenly posted the title for Part Two of this story so now it has its proper title. Yes, Ashley is a trouble maker in more ways than one.
Why do I have the feeling that Orlando letting Mike drive away will have more serious consequences than he imagined? This is such a good story, I'm thoroughly hooked. It's been a long, long time since I was this captivated by a story, and knowing there's a lot more to come is great. You know that feeling when you want to finish a good book to see how it ends, but at the same time you want it to last? That's what's happening to right now. Great work!
Oh, God... this is really, really different from the other story I read that you wrote. I've only read the Prelude, but there's such emotion in it, I can't wait to read the rest. I'm intrigued and I'm also touched by what the character is going through. I'm glad I finally made myself the time to read this. Expect more reviews soon!
Very interesting story here. I like uniqueness and am eager to finish. You have done a really good job at writing this now on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry to be so late in responding but between work and I'm onto the second part of this story which will be a trilogy but appreciate your feedback.
Beautifully written, capturing the emotions perfectly and making it seem so real. Great work, don't stop!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comments and posted three more chapters.