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Reviewer: Elbereth Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/12 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 17

Very clever, as always. I especially like how you slotted the narrator into the story this time. :)
Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: IAmNoMan18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/12 - 08:41 am Title: Chapter 17

Ooh, great job! I cannot think of any true criticism(considering I just nearly spelled criticism wrong). But keep writing!

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