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Reviewer: Nostariel Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/03/13 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter 21: First Day At Beth's

This is "fudging" amazing! I hope you write more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I'm working on the next chapter as soon as I can

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 21: First Day At Beth's

The plot thickens.
Figures Boromir wouldnt know to wrap it up. And Cory was that desperate.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 19: Let The Games Begin

Thriller vibe is really hitting.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 16: Case Re-Opened

The plot with the Donnelly case is a welcome change of pace. And its nice to know Cory is smiling.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 14: Reconciliation Is An Understatement

Bout time.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 12: The Book

I was waiting for this moment.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 11: Lost And Found, Then Lost Again

Heartwrenching.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 10: A Sick Form Of Foreplay

So romantic...

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 9: One Big Scary Spark

Choice of movies is immactulate. Watching the relationship grow is pleasant. Good piece.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 8: Montpelier

Holy Shnike. The stimulation of the dream, ending in the rage, leaving Cory slick and SOL...
Well done.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 7: Why Cory Must Do Everything

The part about Cory's double personality is important. Cant say why.
But the Love Actually reference is deeply appreciated,
and i would /hate/ to be Boromir...

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 6: TGIF, But It Ain't Friday

Beth is a great character, the depth you put in this chapter is a great addition to the repetiore.
And again, with the kids. so damn cute.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 5: Gotta Love Family

The story of her fiancee and its effect on her really hits home, very believable.
And the both of them with the children, the connection is felt, a very touching moment.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 3: Nothing On This Guy

When Boromir tells his birthdate the second time, it should include 'of the Third Age' if he saw how bewildered cory was. Just a thought. But again. Dialog doesnt miss a beat.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: Wide Awake

Great piece. Cory has heart.

Reviewer: MrEnterprise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/13 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: An Unwanted Call

The progression from the other story I read to this one is evident. Much more sophisticated writing style, very well done.

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/12 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter 20: The Lake House(Not The Movie)

It was short, but good. When is the next chapter up?

Author's Response: I know! I feel so bad that it's so short! I'm trying to write the next chapter up ASAP. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Erato Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/09/12 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter 19: Let The Games Begin

Ok, Interesting... can't wait to see what happens next! Wonderfuly written as allways!!!

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/12 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter 18: A Different Sort Of Punishment

Nothing wrong with kink every now-and again. :P

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/12 - 08:44 am Title: Chapter 16: Case Re-Opened

Tori, please check your e-mail (and I suppose your jusnk mail too while at it). :)

Author's Response: I sent the email before I published. See I got you ;) Any new emails are sent right to my tablet.

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