This is a very good story. You give a lot of detail to the scenery and the characters which is good and it is very sad and had me on the verge of tears for the boy's lost mother. Keep writing as I would like to see how the story unfolds. Five stars. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! I really wanted it to come across as a tragic piece, so it's good to see that's working well. The next chapter will be up soon. :)
Reviews For Of Mabrand, the Axe of Lossarnach.
Title: Chapter II: Of Mabrand's Youth. Reviewer: ItalianGuy235 Signed
Date: 30/01/13 - 07:42 am [Report This]