Your profile says that English is not your first language, but I would never have guessed. Your writing is beautiful! I love your descriptions; I feel as if I am right there with her. You write in such a way that the reader can picture everything, and I really like that. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Ahh, that's so sweet :) I've been practising for over a year now and I'm proud of what I've achieved so far :D When I'm writing the scenes come to life in my head and I try my best to translate that on paper... it's the writers job to take the reader on a journey, right? ;) (I'm typing this on my phone.. So no spellcheck)
May I offer a couple of corrections?
As you can imagine, the elves have different gender names than humans.
Female elf: elleth
Males elf: ellon.
It just throws me off whenever you refer to the ellons and elleths as men and women. I don't know, maybe it's just me. :)
Other than that, they story is quite good, and I'm curious to read where you'll take us.
Author's Response: Oh shoot, how could I forget that .. I know that they have different gender names, but as I was writing I totally forgot .. I'll fix it and from now on I'll use the correct term ;) Thanks for pointing it out