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Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/03/13 - 01:22 am Title: Celebrían’s Farewell

It's lovely, but may I propose one correction?
Saying "children" just seems wrong to me (that's what members of the race of men have), perhaps you can consider "elflings"? :)

Author's Response: That's a very valid point- thanks! I shall edit now. :)

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