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Title: Celebrían’s Farewell Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
It's lovely, but may I propose one correction?
Saying "children" just seems wrong to me (that's what members of the race of men have), perhaps you can consider "elflings"? :)

Author's Response: That's a very valid point- thanks! I shall edit now. :)
Date: Mar 29 2013 08:22 pm [Report This]
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