Ahh no! I want more.
I really enjoyed this chapter and the one about taking dating advice from a hobbit. Simply because in each if them there were very relatable, awkward situations. I hope you continue to do the other two books as well.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for reviewing! I really am thrilled you liked it :) I am actually planning the other two books now, so that will be posted some time soon! I really am so happy you enjoyed the story and thank you for reviewing! :)
I really enjoyed this story! You did really well to keep them all in character, despite the awkward/amusing situations you put them in. My favourite chapters were Eating Habits, Food and Hair! Great story-I hope there's one for The Two Towers!
Author's Response: Wow I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :D I am in the process of planning one for Two Towers and also for Return of the King, so you're in luck! :P unfortunately I don't expect Frodo and Sam to feature much, as there's nothing really funny about their situation! But I'm sure Merry and Pippin will get up to enough mischief for all of them! :P
I can totally see that happening!
I really like how you have the awkward moments but then you are also telling the story in order. I shall continue on.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I found that telling it in order was just logical and made it seem a bit more like a story and not just random chapters, so I'm glad you think that's good! :) and I tried hard not to make them too cliché and to make sure they were believable, so it's great that paid off! I really hope you continue to enjoy! :) T.E.
This is brilliant :D I loved it
Author's Response: Aw I'm so glad you liked it! I have plans to write one for Two Towers and Return of the King, so at some point that will be posted. But thank you so much for your review, and I am so happy you enjoyed it! :)