Reviews For Fading Flower
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: django Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/01/14 - 06:16 am Title: Part One: Daylight Chapter One: Sun on the Water

FollowingCoach Outlet Online“The Big Short”, and again exercisingCoach Outlet his twin passions for high financeCoach Factory Outletand human folly, Michael Lewis Coach Factory Outletshifts his focus from America toCoach Outlet Storeis drawn to the surreal and uncanny,Coach Outlet Store Onlineblooming on the fringes of ordinaryCoach Outlet lives “like growths of mold”. HisCoach Factory Onlinetitle story is narrated by a ghost Coach Factory Outlet who, yearning for companionship, Coach Outletbreaks the heart of a lonely teacher.Coach Factory OutletAnother, the inspiration for the filmCoach Outlet“The Illusionist”, follows a magicianCoach Outlet Storeso good at creating illusions that Coach Outlet Store Onlinehe becomes, himself, illusory. In Coach Outlet Onlinea third, a giant shopping mallTrue Religion Jeans seduces, then enslaves, an entireTrue Religion Outlettown. Behind his courteous prose,True ReligionMillhauser seems to be holding somethingMichael Kors Outlet Onlineback, like a doctor soft-pedalling Michael Handbags Outleton grim FINANC Boomerang by MichaelMichael Kors Outlet Store OnlineLewis (Allen Lane, hardback, out now).Michael Kors Outlet StoresEurope on a hilarious journey of Chanel Outlet Online“financial-disaster tourism” throughLouis Vuitton Outletthe countries that gorged most grosslyLouis Vuitton Handbagsthrough the

Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/08/13 - 12:36 pm Title: Part One Chapter Two: Mishchief Doesn't Make Itself

If you want to add more details to your scenes in Minas Tirith and the King's House (not a castle), I recommend "The Atlas of Middle Earth" by Karen Wynn Fonstad. You may also borrow descriptions from my story "Arwen's Journey", which contains many scenes in and about the upper levels of the capital, as well as the New City Quarter which would have likely been built during the Fourth Age as the population expanded.

Author's Response: Thank you for your offer, I just might do that. To be honest, there's a whole lot about Middle-Earth I don't know, and I'm sorta....making it up as I go. But thank you. I don't know when next there will be a chapter here, but I'll definitely take a look at your story!

Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/07/13 - 09:36 pm Title: Part One: Daylight Chapter One: Sun on the Water

This is an interesting and well-written introduction to your story. Have you assigned it a specific year yet?

Author's Response: Not so much a specific year, as it takes place over a span of years. MaŽ was born in the summer of 3022, after the War of the Ring. She is eleven in this chapter. Thank you for your review; I really love it! I'm glad you're enjoying what I've got.

You must login (register) to review.