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Reviewer: maidenoferebor Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/08/13 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it so much! I love the angst between them and I also love how Kili is the instigator. A quick comment though on the rating... I would up it, just to be safe because of the language. Also keep in mind that the rating applies to the overall story, not individual chapters, so if you are going to have something later that will qualify as a more explicit rating, you should have that on there now. But that aside, I cannot wait for the next chapter!!

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