This is a brilliant story! I love that Gimli got the girl in the previous one, and in this one the Jess/Kat dynamic is very funny.
I found a very interesting mini-Balrog, if you're going to continue this: Pheariannath, instead of Periannath/Pheriannath. Sounds like some type of evil ghost, doesn't it?
Ok, you're probably getting fed up with my postings, but there are a couple of things I would like to say.
Firstly, please post more soon. Since first finding OFUM by accident, I have been sucked into the world of OFUs and am constantly checking for new posts.
Secondly, I would love to enroll- or be enrolled, if so necessary- just to be a part of it. And yes, I have been paying a lot of attention to what the students go through.
I have never created a mini Balrog. However, I am willing to do so if that is what it takes for m to get a place in OFUM's third year.
I bow to the power of the Headmaster and the Course Coordinator in this matter.
Just a note- perhaps you forgot to check, but among Turin's list of names you have put "Agwaren". Did you perhaps mean Agarwaen? If so, I hope Agwaren is another mini-Balrog. An angsty mini would be fairly hilarious.
Are we allowed to lust after the Headmaster? ...Probably not. Forget I said that. Even though he is really cool.
I want more! Why have you not finished this? You could give Evil!Denethor and Evil!Thranduil lessons in Evil, just stopping like that. I would say that it's not fair, but nothing at OFUM is fair.
Are you ever going to finish this by the way? This must be the third... fourth? time I've reread this so I'd just like to know.
I never get tired of it, but I'm always dissapointed when there isn't more :-)
Ah, I love this story, it is too funny. Of course, my beta-reader instincts are trying to kick in and correct spelling/gramatical mistakes, but I'm just a freak like that
*Would be the only one to enjoy Grammer BootCamp*
...Yes...well, keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Aww...that's all? Please write more! I want to know if Jess and Kat join the staff, or if they even pass and get a license. It's such a good series.
"I heard Yano dare suggest Lord Elrond should take anger management lessons," Denethor said merrily. "I saw her trying to learn Elvish for her 100,000 'If I read what some authors had goblins doing to my beloved, I'd be angry too' sentences to write." What they had goblins doing to...? Oh. Oh, no. Eru's love! I'd hoped they hadn't read THAT one... Please give my sincere and endless pity to them both...
Hello! I've only recently become a member, and since I'm lazy I don't feel like going back and revieweing every single chapter... This story is really great, Just as good as the first one (Which I reviewed on FanFiction.net, under a different name...) I especially like the crossover part, but every chapter is hillarious, and they all hold something new to laugh at. The OCs are marvellous, and I love the way you write the Canons. It's very satisfying to read about how they deal with all those things that annoy you so much in fanfics. So, keep op the good work, and update soon!
Hello! I am completely new! (All point and laugh). But felt compelled to write to you to proclaim your brilliance! Have been in stitiches for the duration of my reading! Need more to state my hunger! UPDATE Please! need more urple madness! Luving it!
I know you're fed up with me reviewing (and I really should give others a chance) but I simply couldn't resist.
The signatures are to die for. Santa's letter had me in stitches and Thranduil's replies are too cute...err...pardon, dignified.
You quite frankly rock! And now that I've *really* embarassed myself, I should stop squee'ing and shut up.
Festering pimple on the behind of Arda, MelodySingsALot, great winged platypuses, walking vomit...
Your imagination is *needed*. We need to clone you or something. Make mini-Cams to ensure that you really do take over the world.
I'm still dying from laughter. Hee!
The names, oh the names...Snow. More Snow. Do not like snow. Purple goes well with orange. Wheee!
Discovering Tolkien's LotR, $30
Realizing more ME books other than LotR exist, $200
Deciding to write fanfic, painful
Reading Camilla's stories, priceless!
Psst, you kick ass!