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Reviewer: Frodo_Baggins Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/08 - 10:47 am Title: Six

That was really good. I was hookded, I had to finish it. :)

Reviewer: Merry Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/06 - 08:54 pm Title: Six

That is so sad. It made me cry.

Reviewer: Bobbi Baggins Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/05 - 05:26 pm Title: One

I loved this story! It was so sad, but so brilliant!

Reviewer: Bobbi Baggins Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/05 - 05:26 pm Title: One

I loved this story! It was so sad, but so brilliant!

Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/04 - 03:01 am Title: Six

That was so sad but very well done. Good job. :)

Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/04 - 02:49 am Title: Three

This is AU as all hell but I like that. Good chapter!

Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/04 - 02:44 am Title: One

This is so sad, yet so beautiful! I love it already.

One small grammatical note- You tend to mix up "to" and "too". A good way to help with that is to ask yourself if the word means "also" or "more" (as in, "I will go too." or "Too many were lost.") Other than that, you should use "to".

Great job otherwise and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: White Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/04 - 02:10 am Title: Six

The last sentence was very sad, and of course, very true. I'm glad Arwen tried to make Legolas feel better instead of blaming him for not being able to keep his promise. to keep Estel safe I'm also happy that Pippin will be going to Valinor. Hopefully, he and Legolas will find peace there.

Reviewer: White Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/04 - 07:31 pm Title: Three

A very interesting AU. I knew this was going to be very sad going in, and I was not wrong. You are dong a good job describing it. Legolas's grief is particularly sad. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you! This is one of my favorite stories, and I'm glad you liked it! More to come soon, I promise!

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