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Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: gythia Signed
ooh, I hope you update soon! For the very first time I find myself cheering (instead of jeering) at the strange power of the Mary-Sue to make a character forget the one he loves.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, although I'm sorry to hear that you consider my OFC to be a Mary Sue... I shall strive to make her less so in future updates.
Date: 22/05/06 - 09:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is a wonderful story! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will... ^_^!
Date: 21/11/04 - 08:47 am [Report This]
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