I think sometimes, it's the littlest of things that can describe what a whole book could not. You captured the scene in as many words as he would have been able to think before death. Although, I keep to the book about Haldir because I like him so much. I don't want to see him die.
My only complaint is that it wasn't longer. Keep it up!
Author's Response: LIke I've said, if youre interested in reading this any further, this will be turned into a series of one shots. I'll try to make them longer. THANK YOU! (BTW, I love your stories.)
I love the descriptions you've used in this :) Nicely done.
Author's Response: I try. *grin* Im going to make this into a series of one shots concerning the thoughts of characters during certain events from both the book and the movie, if you are interested. THANK YOU SO MUCH!