I absoulutly love this story! I really hope that you will keep writing soon. When will Nebride tell her new family about the abuse she recieved from her step father? I always like it when the family gets very defensive. Keep writing, you are doing very well!!
eep. I see a mechanical error. Be sure you start each sentence on a new line when a conversation is going on. It gets very confusing reading a whole paragraph with all those quotation marks. Other than that, great chapter! : ) aloha