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I absoulutly love this story! I really hope that you will keep writing soon. When will Nebride tell her new family about the abuse she recieved from her step father? I always like it when the family gets very defensive. Keep writing, you are doing very well!!
Could you please, please update soon??!!
hurry and put the next chapter up! can't wait!=)
why is this one called chapter one? isn't it chapter7?
anyways loving the story!
this whole story so far was great.
I loved the start.
well i hope if this is going to an end it is a happy one none die i hope i want to read the next one i like it very much
Grr. I don't like Janelle. She's a meanie. I loved this chapter! I always love when the archery lessons come into play. Those are my favorite. Update soon! aloha
eep. I see a mechanical error. Be sure you start each sentence on a new line when a conversation is going on. It gets very confusing reading a whole paragraph with all those quotation marks. Other than that, great chapter! : ) aloha
This chapter was awesome too. Just one question, how could Legolas just know that she looked a certain age? Especially when his age is in teh thousands.
Nice chapter. I think I reviewed your story on ff.net... lol Or, maybe not. eep. I know I read it, and I loved it.