You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/07 - 09:30 pm Title: Last Alliance

It's very stirring. I really like the use of color and sound words. My one quibble is that "There were some that resisted" would be better grammatically.

Author's Response: *tsk* That is a very good point...yeah. Yeah, you're absolutely right. But I don't know if it's just that I've been too familiarized with "who" or what it is, but I just don't think it has the same powerful ring (no pun intended). But yeah, it really would be, blast it all...stupid poetry. Anyway, thank you!

You must login (register) to review.