Reviews For Ashes
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Reviewer: Daewen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/09 - 02:09 pm Title: Ashes

Poor little hobbits to be carried away from their beloved Shire and thrust into terrible battles. You sum that all up in just three stanzas.

Reviewer: Merry Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/07 - 06:59 pm Title: Ashes

Wow! That is beautiful! Love it!

Reviewer: Camilla Sandman Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/04 - 03:08 pm Title: Ashes

Bit short, but nicely written.

Reviewer: Tathrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/11/04 - 07:15 am Title: Ashes

Pretty cool look at the Shadow on Merry. I particuarly liked the descriptive mood of the first stanza. I think that really captured the feel of the scene. The closing line was lovely as well; the perfect illustration of what it must feel like lying under the Black Breath. Very nice.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it ! The Witch-King scene is one of my favourite and I tried to give power to Merry's despair in this short poem. Writing poetry in English is really great ;) Thanks for reviewing !

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