An interesting notion, Arwen and Haldir having an affair while she lived in Lorien. I am curious to seewhere you'll take this. The tension in this chapter was palpable. Well done.
You might want to emphasize meeded words by making them bold instead of putting them in asterisks.
Author's Response: Hello, and thanks for reviewing. This story is the first in a series spanning seven. These are old works of mine, posted here on request by the mods, and won't be edited further. --Afraid you'll have to live without the bolds ;)