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Reviewer: Spots Zephyr Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/09/05 - 09:58 pm Title: The End, and the Beginning

Wow! What an awesome story! I was amazed at the depth you mananged to portray in your characters although I will admit that the time jumps could be just slightly confusing. Also, if you don't already have a beta you might want to find someone to just go through your spelling and a couple of random sentances here and there that seem jumbled and maybe italics for the thoughts. But overall it was a very well written piece and I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. :)

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